Excellent
Everything was really funny and very creative. The only eh thing was the back-scratching part, but the robotic dog's voice was a riot.
Awesome job.
Excellent
Everything was really funny and very creative. The only eh thing was the back-scratching part, but the robotic dog's voice was a riot.
Awesome job.
Short but sweet
Good job, you paid a lot of attention to detail that others wouldn't in a stick animation.
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Oh my God! You killed two minutes of my life!
Yes, that's right, two minutes, because I watched it again to try and give you credit for some legitimacy in the the shooting animation. Sorry.
A good start...
... but from the few strips I saw you guys need to tighten up your punchlines a bit. There's a little dead air between attempts at gags.
Otherwise it's an original format on NG and I wish you all good luck in keeping up with it.
Thanks. Folks are still learning.
But, it would have been nice if you watched them all then reviewed, not only watched a couple. Now I don't even know what ones you saw. =(
Why the hell are you quitting?
For crap's sake, I busted a gut laughing at your "All In The Family" sequence. Don't give this series up! Please! After seeing all these squiggly crap flashes this was definitely a breath of fresh air.
Finally, a Silent Hill tribute that doesn't stink
Good job not patching together a bunch of pixellated SH material and fuzzy background music. I thought this was going to stink with the anime look but it was by turns funny and sinister.
Very well done!
Yes Sir, I Like It
Kudos for downplaying the smug obnoxiousness of people who are only popular on the Internet. Same for the mashed-up white noise for a dog smoking and crying blood (?!? ha ha). The animation's a bit choppy, but at the same time mostly smoothly warped.
Sweet!
P.S. The second cartoon was awesome. I've dated Betty before.
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You need to read a few articles on what constitutes successful animation and writing. Your character was pretty much expressionless and the walking animation needed a lot of work. A man who hates living? How could you even tell? The silence was deafening.
The previous reviewer was right, though, and I'm not trying to be destructive. You do have potential, and I hope Tom put you on front page for a reason, but... ugh. Practice... please.
I always try to improve, thanks for the review :)
Don't bother sending messages if you're 10 or younger and were raised with the impression you can kill people you disagree with. Cheers.
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