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[10 Things To Do With...]

Excellent

Everything was really funny and very creative. The only eh thing was the back-scratching part, but the robotic dog's voice was a riot.

Awesome job.

[Animation Practice 1]

Short but sweet

Good job, you paid a lot of attention to detail that others wouldn't in a stick animation.

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[South Park Chase Scene]

Oh my God! You killed two minutes of my life!

Yes, that's right, two minutes, because I watched it again to try and give you credit for some legitimacy in the the shooting animation. Sorry.

[Sunday Comics & Toons 004]

A good start...

... but from the few strips I saw you guys need to tighten up your punchlines a bit. There's a little dead air between attempts at gags.

Otherwise it's an original format on NG and I wish you all good luck in keeping up with it.

RSQViper responds:

Thanks. Folks are still learning.

But, it would have been nice if you watched them all then reviewed, not only watched a couple. Now I don't even know what ones you saw. =(

[Phoenix Wrong 3]

Why the hell are you quitting?

For crap's sake, I busted a gut laughing at your "All In The Family" sequence. Don't give this series up! Please! After seeing all these squiggly crap flashes this was definitely a breath of fresh air.

[New Numa]

About goddamned time you got back in the spotlight

When I heard you went back to your nickel and dime slave job, I was like, wha the faaaaaa?

This one's not quite as manic, but it's still great. Keep it up, man! You've got a gift for making people laugh with you, not at you. You ought to have your own movie.

[Silent Hill 2: CE]

Finally, a Silent Hill tribute that doesn't stink

Good job not patching together a bunch of pixellated SH material and fuzzy background music. I thought this was going to stink with the anime look but it was by turns funny and sinister.

Very well done!

[Popular on the Internet]

Yes Sir, I Like It

Kudos for downplaying the smug obnoxiousness of people who are only popular on the Internet. Same for the mashed-up white noise for a dog smoking and crying blood (?!? ha ha). The animation's a bit choppy, but at the same time mostly smoothly warped.

Sweet!

P.S. The second cartoon was awesome. I've dated Betty before.

[Sentient Fish Rape]

The Wesley addition was awesome. =D

And all in all a very funny, well done short. My roommate is the school of fish!

[The Valkyrie Ep.1]

:|

You need to read a few articles on what constitutes successful animation and writing. Your character was pretty much expressionless and the walking animation needed a lot of work. A man who hates living? How could you even tell? The silence was deafening.

The previous reviewer was right, though, and I'm not trying to be destructive. You do have potential, and I hope Tom put you on front page for a reason, but... ugh. Practice... please.

clevelandsteamer1 responds:

I always try to improve, thanks for the review :)